备战2023年中考英语高分作文
热点03中华优秀传统文化
一、材料作文
要求：1.包含所给出的要点；2．80词以上。
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【参考范文】
A special form of traditional art—Chinese knots
Chinese knots are a form of Chinese traditional art.The history of Chinese knots dates back to ancient times.It is said that they were developed into an art form in the Tang and Song Dynasties and later bec
ame popular in the Ming and Qing Dynasties.
Colorful thread is used for tying the knots.However，the most commonly used color is red because it symbolizes good luck and prosperity.The knots can be used as car or mobile phone decorations.Also，people hang the knots in rooms.
Chinese knots can be seen in different parts of China，which are popular among the young and the old.
【详解】这是一篇给提纲的图表类提纲作文。根据短文要求，要写一篇介绍中国结的短文。按提纲，本文要介绍中国结的历史、颜、用途及现状等等。介绍其历史，用一般过去时态，介绍其颜、用途及现状，主要用一般现在时态。为了便于表示，短文可以用一些被动语态的句子。短文要包含提纲提示的所有要点，要注意句型结构的选择。以突出中心，表达完整正确。
点睛：本范文介绍了中国结的历史、颜、用途及现状等等，包含了提纲提示的所有要点。内容完整、要点清楚，层次清楚明白，主旨分明，中心突出。特别是文中用到的短语：be used for ; be used as; be popular among等等及像it is said等等复杂句式的运用，使短文生动具体。总之，这是一篇较好的习作范文。
2．舞狮是中国优秀的传统民间艺术。请你为班级英语角的“人物”版块写一篇短文，介绍一位舞狮（Lion Dance）技艺传承人——叶天。短文内容包含以下要点：
1.叶天的基本信息（男，45岁，佛山人）和学习舞狮的经历（4岁学习舞狮，22岁获得全国舞狮比赛一等奖）；
2.他是如何传承舞狮的（到国外表演、教年轻人舞狮，……）；
3.你对叶天和舞狮的看法。
要求：1.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数内；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3.可适当增加细节，以使条理清楚、行文连贯；
4.标点正确，书面整洁。
提示词：传承alive
Ye Tian is a master of Lion Dance.
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【参考范文】
Ye Tian is a master of Lion Dance. He is 45 years old and he is from Foshan, Guangdong. When he was 4, he started to learn Lion Dance. He is very interested in it and practices hard. At the age of 22, he won the first prize in the National Lion Dance Competition.
To help keep the Lion Dance alive, he and the dancers go abroad and perform Lion Dance every year. Besides, he teaches the young in Foshan how to perform it. He also shoots the videos of Lion Dance and uploads them to the website so that more people can know about it.
Lion Dance is one of the traditional Chinese folk arts that brings people happiness during festivals. I really admire Ye Tian. In my view, we should learn more about Lion Dance from Ye Tian and pass it down.
【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。以班级英语角的“人物”版块写一篇短文，介绍舞狮（Lion Dance）技艺传承人——叶天。
2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述故事内容；时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主。文章可以分成三个段落，第一段介绍叶天的基本信息和学习舞狮的经历；第二段描述他如何传承舞狮的；最后一段谈谈叶天和舞狮的看法。
二、书信作文
3．年夜饭是中国文化中最重要的团圆饭，传统的年夜饭是除夕祭祖后才能食用。假如你是李华，请给你以Family Dinner on Spring Festival Eve为题，向你的外国笔友Jack介绍你家的年夜饭—包括菜式(至少三种)、寓意以及相关的文化习俗，描述吃年夜饭的场景以及家人的感受等，并邀请他明年除夕来你家共聚。
要求：1.文章应涵盖所有要点。内容简洁明了，衔接过渡自然。
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
3.词数：100词左右。
参考词汇：团圆饭reunion dinner祭祖worship the ancestor
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【参考范文】
Dear Jack,
I am glad to know that you are interested in the family dinner on the Spring Festival Eve.
It is the most important reunion dinner in Chinese traditional culture. On Spring Festival Eve, family members get together to enjoy the dinner after worshipping the ancestors. There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks. Many of them usually have great meanings. For example, New Year cake is often the first dish, which means “having good luck and becoming better” in Chinese pronunciation. Another dish is fish, which means “every year has enough thing to spend”. One of the most important food is dumpling, which means “attracting wealth”. To me, the family dinner on the Spring Festival Eve means happiness. Because at that time, all my families get together and I can get a lot of lucky money.
I hope you can come to China next year and celebrate the Spring Festival with my family.
Yours
Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
① 时态：时态为一般现在时；
① 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要用第一人称叙述，不要遗漏参考词汇和“提示信息”中年夜饭的重要性，（至少）三种重要菜式以及它们的寓意，相关文化习俗，自己及家人的感受，以及邀请对方明年来共聚除夕，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“亲爱的杰克，我很高兴知道你对春节前夕的家庭晚餐感兴趣。”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“年夜饭的重要性；年夜饭中的代表菜式及它们的寓意；我和家人对年夜饭的感受及一些文化习俗”几方面重点介绍年夜饭的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语。表达“我希望你明年能来中国，和我的家人一起庆祝春节。”的强烈愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① on the Spring Festival Eve在除夕夜舞狮的作文
① all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①There are all kinds of delicious food and drinks.（There be句型）
①One of the most important food is dumpling, which means “attracting wealth”. （which引导的定语从句；one of the+最高级+名词复数表示“其中最……之一”）
4．Write a letter of at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一封不少于60个词的信，标点符号不占格。信的开头和署名已给，不计入总字数。)
“汉语桥“中文能力大赛的成功举办说明越来越多的外国学生对中华优秀文化很感兴趣。假设你是李华，你的外国网友Peter对中华文化很感兴趣，想了解并学习。请从以下中华文化的六种表现中，选择你最喜欢的一种推荐给他，并说明理由。
中华武术(Chinese martial arts）京剧(Peking Opera）中华书法(Chinese calligraphy)
中文歌曲(Chinese songs）中华美食(Chinese food）中华剪纸(Chinese paper-cutting)
(注意：1. 信中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。)
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