一本对我影响深刻的书英语作文
【篇一：英语四级写作范文及点评：对我一生影响最大的书】
英语四级写作范文及点评：对我一生影响最大的书
读书如交友。通过书，你可以和几千年前的孔子、苏格拉底交流思想，你可以与几百年前的曹雪芹、卢梭围炉恳谈。你，和几个伟大的灵魂交流过?  the most influential book in my life
the story of my life by helen keller is the most influential book in my life. it abounds with courage, struggle and faith throughout.① helen keller was once in deep despair in her childhood, but finally she decided to overcome her physical defects and live happily. furthermore, she showed great patience in her long and hard learning period.
i have learned, above all, three lessons from her story.② first, she taught me that often the road to success is to face hardships bravely. maybe you are born under an ill star yet you can stand a better chance than others. it is therefore important that you screw up your courage when courage is needed. second, the impairment of part of her sense
s did not prevent her from learning: on the contrary, she had made continual efforts to go deeper into the realm of knowledge, and her perseverance had thus helped her overcome many handicaps. third, she advised that we should make the most of our sense organs as if we would lose them soon because this way we would observe the world more carefully than ever before.③
the book is inspiring in that it is one brimming over with the unbending will of a gallant woman beset with seemingly insurmountable difficulties.④i hope i can be as courageous as she.
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四级英语作文范文 行文点评
文章第一句直接切入主题：the story of my life by helen keller is the most influential book in my life。接下来，对书和主人公进行了简要介绍。第二段从三个方面具体说明该书对作者的影响和启示。三个副词first、second、third之后，分别从面对困难、坚忍不拔、和珍惜我们的感官三个方面阐述了这本书对读者的影响。最后一段进行概括性说明。
文章字斟句酌，第一段运用abound with这个固定搭配指出作者认为这本书对其影响最大的原因，即courage, struggle and faith。行文过渡自然，第一段中用furthermore进行第二点补充，实现了句与句之间的衔接，丰富了内容，保证了全文的连贯性。结尾处as... as的运用，与首段主题句相互照应，深化了主题，为短文画上了圆满的句号。
好文妙译
对我一生影响最大的书
这本书催人奋进，全篇洋溢着一个勇敢的女人在被一些看似不可能克服的困难困扰时所表现出来的不屈的精神。希望我也可以和她一样的勇敢。
词汇斟酌
?under an ill star 生来不幸
?impairment n. 损害, 损伤
?brim v. 充满，溢出
?gallant a. 英勇的
?insurmountable a.不能克服的
佳句临摹
①【注释】abound with充满
【临摹】the region abounds with rain all the year around.那个地区终年多雨。②【注释】above all首先，最重要的是
【临摹】i should like to rent a house - modern, comfortable and above all in a quiet location.我想租一幢房子——要求设备现代化、舒适，尤其是地段要清净。
③【注释】make most of sth充分利用，最大限度利用
【临摹】we should make the most of our resources without wasting.我们应该充分利用资源不要浪费。
④【注释】brim over with充满，洋溢
【临摹】we won the foot game just now, so all of us are brimming over with joy.我们刚刚赢了足球比赛，大家都兴高采烈。
【临摹】we brim over with sympathy after she told us her sad story.她告诉我们她的悲苦身世后,我们对她深表同情。
思如泉涌
books and friends should be few but good.读书如交友，但求少而精。
use a book as a bee does a flower.对待书籍，要像蜜蜂对待花朵一样。
【篇二：对我影响最深的一本书】
对我影响最深的一本书
一直认为，一本好书就像是那么一股清新淡雅的微风，吹入一个人的心灵，能够潜移默化地影响他的身心乃至性格。
直至今日，我依然记得与《名人传》的邂逅，它带给我的是永远的改变。
考试失利过后，我无力地摔在床上，泪水不禁从眼角落下。老师漫不经心的眼神，同学们居高临下的嘲笑，父母恨铁不成钢的职责与叹息??这些在我心中仿佛有千万只野狼在疯狂地撕咬。我淹没在痛苦的海洋，咸咸的海水涌进我的喉咙，使我窒息。我企图大声呼救，但没有人会听到。谁能理解我呢？世界上似乎只有我的小床能够理解我的苦楚。泪干了，疲惫袭身而来，我转过身，不经意间，一本有着米黄封面的书映入我的眼帘，是《名人传》。我不禁冷笑了两声：切，什么名人，他们的生活是多么顺利幸福，怎像我，如今身处逆境，没有信心，也没有勇气再站起来??心里这么想着，但是手还是伸向了它，翻开，阅读。“贝多芬??米开朗琪罗??托尔斯泰”我的手开始颤抖了，随着眼睛的阅读，我越发崇敬起这三位名人。也许在常人眼中，定会认为名人身边笼罩着耀眼光环，要什么有什么，但实际却并非如此。文中的三位名人非但没有幸福的生活，且终日被生活的窘困，命运的坎坷所困扰，但他们没有像我这么消极沉沦，而是最终以积极的心态面对生活，创造出了世人惊叹的杰作。读罢全文，我自惭形秽，与他们相比，我只是小小的考试失利而已，简直没有必要在这里絮絮叨叨。
也许就是信念支持着他们走下来的吧。想到这里，我开始明白了，为何从前我总也取不得成功，就是因为缺少了再站起来的信心与勇气。这时，整个房间充满了阳光、温馨的味道，仿
佛有无数个曼舞的小精灵，我欣喜地捕捉着它们，心底抽发着嫩绿的新芽，干涸已久的心房注入了潺潺的溪水，我心中的太阳开始升起，与这轮冬日相接相契，连接它们的是达观和信念。我奋然而起，摒弃了所有的冗杂与烦恼，愈加感到有一股信心与勇气，心底的希望之花愈加烂漫芬芳。
昂起头，告别过去，重拾信心，大步走向前。
谢谢你，《名人传》，我会一直珍藏你的隽永，我也会一直铭记：一本好书就像是那么一股清新淡雅的微风，那么令人如痴如醉。
【篇三：英语作文—我最喜欢第一本书】
readings and it’s written by j. k. rowling. she had the idea about harry potter when she was on train, “harry just walked into my head.” she said later. she started writing the first edition of harry potter the next day.
harry potter is a magical school student who wears glasses and has no parents, now he is 16 years old. he is very brave and known by everyone because he is the only p
erson who will not die by devil. at school, he has two good friends, they are rone and hey.