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(2019全国Ⅰ,书面表达)
第二节书面表达（满分25分）
假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿者，内容包括:
1. 写信目的；
2. 个人优势；
3. 能做的事情。
注意:
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 结束语已为你写好。
【试题趋势】：
今年全国卷一的书面表达要求考生写一封申请信，仍然属于书信应用文。试题要求考生给伦敦的一家将举办中国画展览的美术馆写信，申请当一名志愿者。
本篇书面表达体现了传播中国传统文化与中外文化交流。与2018年及2017年高考书面表达所考查的内容比较类似。2018年是新西兰人来中国人家做客，2017年是给外国人上汉语课讲唐诗，都融入了对中国传统文化的宣传，树立文化自信和民族自豪感。同时，今年的考题还融入了美育知识，引导学生关注和提高审美情趣。正如我们去年对2019年试题趋势的分析和预测一样，掌握一些传统文化方面的英语知识势在必行。
在备考时，要集中看一些与日常生活和传统文化相关的话题，如文学艺术、风土人情、社交礼仪、饮食、体育运动、语言学习等，按照话题网络化复习，效果会更佳。
【试题分析】：
书面表达旨在考查考生的英语写作能力，评价其能否运用相关常识和语言知识进行有效的文字表达，完成特定的交际任务。今年的书面表达要求考生写一封申请信。题目的内容要点设计比较灵活，难度与往年大致相当。
写作的基本要求是切题、完整、准确、连贯。作文要切题，考生要认真审题，精准把握主旨，确保内容围绕主题展开；内容要完整，短文要覆盖各内容要点，无遗漏地完成交际任务；表达要准确，语言运用应贴切、得体，能有力支撑交际目的的顺利实现；行文要连贯，各要点间应关系紧密，脉络清晰。
今年的书面表达要求从写信目的、个人优势和能做的事情这三个方面展开写作。考生在写作时要做到层次分明，应着重掌握个人优势的常用表达，如I’m good at …；I have the ability to …；I’m experienced in …等等。从语言风格来讲，短文应该是正式的形式，应运用得体的语气及礼貌用语或结构等。
【内容分析】
文体 | 书信体——申请信 |
申请职位 | 志愿者 |
写信目的 | I am writing to apply for / express my interest in / recommend myself as ... |
个人优势 | I am good at …；I have the ability to …；I am experienced in …；I work hard and I can get along well with others. |
能做的事 | I can help with … / I’ll devote myself to … / I’ll try my best to … |
个人发挥 | 适当增加相关细节 |
话题词汇激活 | 艺术：artwork, drawing, gallery, painting, art collection, museum of art, on display / exhibition 工作职业：apply for, position, manager, post, artist, musician, painter, volunteer 任职资格/工作能力：ability, potential, professional, certificate, profession, qualified, skill, skillful, competence, competent, qualification, qualify 工作职责：handle, responsibility, duty, task, undertake, take / in charge of （在平时的学习中要注意话题词汇的积累） |
| i am me 运用高级词块和句式 | 词块：可胜任be qualified for；同样重要的是equally important；做某事没有困难have no difficulty in doing sth 句式：which引导的定语从句，if引导的条件状语从句 |
【语言分析】
【参考范文1】
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery. I think I am qualified for this job, because I have learned Chinese painting since childhood. Equally important, I am fluent in both Chinese and English, so I have no difficulty in communicating with others. If I am lucky enough to be chosen as a volunteer, I can show visitors around the gallery and answer their questions about the paintings, after some proper training.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【点评】
1.文章运用了比较高级的表达词汇。比如
apply to be a volunteer；am qualified for；am fluent in；have no difficulty in
2.文章运用了高级句式。比如：I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery.（which引导的定语从句。）
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. （虚拟语气）
【参考范文2】
So delighted am I to know that you are scheduled to hold a Chinese painting display that I have much desire to be your volunteer.
My name is LiHua, aged 18, the reasons why I apply for this job are as follows:
First, as a Chinese who has learned Chinese art for three years, I am familiar with Chinese painting.
First, as a Chinese who has learned Chinese art for three years, I am familiar with Chinese painting.
In addition, I can speak English fluently, and I am keen on helping others inneed.
I take this opportunity as a precious experience to develop my social skils. I can do some introductions to visitors, and do some clean jobs.
Sincerely hope that I can be accepted as a member of you!
I take this opportunity as a precious experience to develop my social skils. I can do some introductions to visitors, and do some clean jobs.
Sincerely hope that I can be accepted as a member of you!
【点评】
1.文章运用了比较高级的表达词汇。比如：be scheduled to do sth; have much desire to do ;aged 18; as follows; be familiar with; fluently，be keen on; take this opportunity as ;sincerely
2.文章运用了高级句式。比如：So delighted am I to know that you are scheduled to hold a Chinese painting display that I have much desire to be your volunteer.
（so…that..引导的倒装句型）
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the opportunity. （虚拟语气）
3.文章运用了适当的过渡词： in addition
【参考范文3】
I am Lihua, a Chinese student. Knowing that there will be an art exhibition of Chinese art, I am more than delighted to apply to be a volunteer and reasons are as follows.
To begin with， I have a fancy for Chinese art so I believe that I can spark the interest of the visitors. In addition, I am outgoing and master of oral English, which make it much easier for me to communicate with the visitors who have doubts. Besides, I can not only give them the correct explanations, but I can also help them understand the history of Chinese art. Eventually, I live close to the exhibition and it is convenient for me to do this job.
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