重庆市巴蜀中学校2023-2024学年高三上学期高考适应性月考卷
实现儿时梦想
续写文本以及翻译
It was my sixth-grade year. I was overjoyed when the U. S. Navy band came to perform in our town. It was an event I'd never forget, and one instrument stood out above all others. That day, at 12 years old, I fell in love with the heavenly sound that came from the trumpets (小号),and a dream was born. Someday, I wanted to join a military band onstage as a guest performer.
那是我六年级那年。当美国海军乐队来到我们镇上演出时,我欣喜若狂。这是我永远不会忘记的一件事,有一种乐器在所有乐器中脱颖而出。那一天,12岁的我爱上了从小号传来的天籁之声,一个梦想就此诞生。有一天,我想加入一个军乐队,在舞台上担任客座演奏员。
My father took notice of my enthusiasm and bought me a used trumpet. I practiced every day, training my lips, mastering my breathing, until I felt at one with the instrument. I made fir
st chair and played trumpet through high school. “Someday I'll play along with a military band,” I told my friends. The details I left to God to figure out, while I pursued a more practical life course. Rather than declaring a performance major in college, I studied to be a music teacher.我父亲注意到了我的热情,给我买了一个二手小号。我每天都在练习,训练我的嘴唇,掌握我的呼吸,直到我觉得与乐器融为一体。我做了首席,整个高中都在吹小号。有一天我会和军乐队一起演奏,我告诉我的朋友们。我把这些细节留给上帝去解决,而我则追求更实际的生活。我没有在大学里选择表演专业,而是学习成为一名音乐老师。
Now I was blessed to be at this military band concert, a magic afternoon that had brought with it a trip down memory lane.
我很幸运能参加军乐队的音乐会,这是一个神奇的下午,它把我带回了一段回忆之旅。
After the concert, I made my way to the stage to thank Colonel (上校) Carino, the conductor of the military band. When he learned I taught music in town and played trumpet, he invited me to play a trumpet solo(独奏) at their next concert in the park.
音乐会结束后,我走上舞台向军乐团指挥卡里诺上校致谢。当他知道我在镇上教音乐和吹小号时,他邀请我在公园的下一次音乐会上演奏小号独奏。A solo? I couldn't remember the last time I'd taken my trumpet out of its case. I doubted I'd even be able to get a decent note out of it. “Sir, that's impossible. I'm sorry, but there's no way.”“In the Army,” the colonel thundered, “you don't say no!”
一个人?我不记得上次把小号从盒子里拿出来是什么时候了。我甚至怀疑我是否能从中得到一个像样的音符。先生,这不可能。很抱歉,但是没有办法。在军队里,上校怒喝道,你不许说不!
I felt scared and trapped. Yet, a lingering thought took root: “Is it possible that life is opening the door to my childhood dream?” I said yes to the invitation. I knew I had to do my part and practiced for hours every day. My lips swelled and then bled.
我感到害怕和被困住了。然而,一个挥之不去的想法却生根发芽了,那就是——“有没有可能,生活正在打开我童年梦想的大门?我答应了邀请。我知道我必须做好自己的本分,每天都练习好几个小时的时间。我的嘴唇肿了起来,然后流血了。
注意: 1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As time passed, Colonel Carino took an unexpected role in my preparation.
I stood on stage next to Manuel(新人物出现), my performance partner.
文本分析:
文章大意--美国海军乐队来到我们镇上演出,从此12岁的我爱上了从小号传来的天籁之声,打算进入军乐队。我在小号上付出了巨大的心血和精力。大学毕业后成为了一名音乐老师。军乐团指挥卡里诺上校邀请我在公园的下一次音乐会上演奏小号独奏,我一开始有些担心和害怕,但他坚持让我去。我开始每天拼命地练习。
情节续写发展:
Para1:续写第一段重点描写卡里诺上校如何帮助我,鼓励我,让我精进技艺并且提高自信的过程。音乐会的日子也终于到了。
Para2:续写第二段重点描写我和表演搭档曼纽尔,尽情吹奏,观众们都被我们的演奏所深深打动。我也感受到了卡里诺上校骄傲的目光,我心中充满了感激之情。最后主旨升华,呼应开头,我实现了儿时的梦想。
语言积累和翻译:(答案在原文以及范文中)
1.那一天,12岁的我爱上了从小号传来的天籁之声,一个梦想就此诞生。
2.我每天都在练习,训练我的嘴唇,掌握我的呼吸,直到我觉得与乐器融为一体。
3.我很幸运能参加军乐队的音乐会,这是一个神奇的下午,它把我带回了一段回忆之旅。
4.然而,一个挥之不去的想法却生根发芽了,那就是——“有没有可能,生活正在打开我童年梦想的大门?
5.感觉到我的焦虑,他对原计划做了周到的调整。
6.在他的指导和曼努埃尔的专业知识下,我重新审视了基本技术,磨练了我忽视的技能。
7.不知不觉中,音乐会的日子到了。
8.面对卡里诺上校骄傲的目光,我心中充满了感激之情。
参考答案以及翻译
As time passed, Colonel Carino took an unexpected role in my preparation. 1Sensing my anxiety,he made a thoughtful adjustment to the original plan. 2Rather than facing the solo challenge, I would have Manuel, an accomplished trumpet player, as my partner. 3Every evening after the band’s practice, Colonel Carino arranged for Manuel to tutor me. 描写人物的英语作文4Under his supervision and with Manuel’s expertise, I revisited fundamental techniques and honed the skills I’d neglected. 5Colonel Carino’s unique combination of discipline and empathy gradually restored my confidence. 6With each session, I felt more inspired to push beyond my boundaries.7 Before I knew it, the concer t day arrived.
随着时间的流逝,卡里诺上校在我的准备工作中起了意想不到的作用。感觉到我的焦虑,他对原计划做了周到的调整。与其独自面对挑战,我宁愿和曼努埃尔,一个多才多艺的小号手,作为我的合作伙伴。每天晚上乐队练习结束后,卡里诺上校安排曼纽尔辅导我。在他的
指导和曼努埃尔的专业知识下,我重新审视了基本技术,磨练了我忽视的技能。卡里诺上校将纪律和同情心独特地结合在一起,逐渐恢复了我的信心。每一次,我都感到更有灵感去超越我的界限。不知不觉中,音乐会的日子到了。
I stood on stage next to Manuel, my performance partner. 1The spotlights ca st a warm glow around us, and the atmosphere was charged with anticipation. 2As the first notes flowed from our trumpets, all my nerves vanished. 3Together, Manuel and I played in harmony. 4Surprisingly,I played better than I had during my best practices. 5As we finished our performance, the crowd leap t to their feet, showering us with applause. 6Meeting Colonel Carino’s proud gaze, I was overwhelmed with gratitude. 7My childhood dream had been realized. 8Not only had I performed with a military band, but I had also forged memories that I would cherish forever.