高中英语作文模拟训练20题(含例文解析)
学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________
一、读后续写
1．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
The Act of Love
I hate pulling weeds! I thought. It's hot. It's sticky. And it's Saturday!
Still, I made sure to pull every stinking（臭的）weed out of that flower garden. My dad was Mr. Perfecto Lawnman. He could detect a single weed a mile away. And if he spotted as much as one weed, I'd be back pulling weeds for the rest of the day.
"Dad. I'm done." I shouted from the garden, feeling sure that I had done a good job. He stormed out of the house. "Don't be yelling outside, Kathy," he grumbled（抱怨）. "Use those two feet of yours and come get me."
Suddenly, a sick feeling came over me. It was the kind of feeling I had when my dad was going to find a stinking weed. "Geez," Dad said, waving an irritated（恼怒的）finger, "you missed a spot." I sighed, went to the spot and pulled the weeds. Afterward, I looked back at Dad, still standing there with a scowl（怒容）on his face, which made me wonder if he even liked me.
Just then, a wet tongue washed over my face, breaking me from my thoughts. Sugar, our dog, looked at me gently. I smiled. "At least you like me."
Two weeks later, on the morning of another weed picking weekend, I was sick, sweaty and feverish, and aching all over. "Let's go," Dad said, lifting me from the bed, "You need to see a doctor." "Please, no," I said, in a shallow, sickly voice, "I'd rather pull weeds." He took me anyway, and the doctor said I had pneumonia（肺炎）. The only nice thing about it was that I didn't have to pull weeds.
描写人物的英语作文注意：
1.续写词数应为150左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
That night, as I rested, a noise suddenly woke me up from my sleep.
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When he was gone, I reached over to the nightstand（床头柜）and picked up the necklace.
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【答案】That night, as I rested, a noise suddenly woke me up from my sleep. I opened my eyes just a sliver, from which I saw a tall, slender form. Enough moonlight shined through my window so that I could see it was my dad. “Why is he here?” I wondered, but still pretended to be sleeping. Surprisingly, he came up to me, putting his hand against my forehead. After all these, he laid a necklace on my nightstand, looking at me again quietly for a while, and then left.
When he was gone, I reached over to the nightstand（床头柜）and picked up the necklace. It wasn’t like any I’d ever seen before. Dangling from a golden chain was a dad bending his arm around a girl’s shoulder, and the girl looked just like me! They seemed to love each other deeply. With shaking hands, I held that necklace to my heart and cried. My dad, who never gave hugs and never said, “I love…” had just said it all.
【解析】
【分析】
【详解】
1.段落续写：
②由第二段首句内容“他走后，我伸手到床头柜前拿起项链。”可知，第二段可描写作者看到项链是什么样子的，感受到父亲是爱自己的。
2.续写线索：惊醒——看到父亲——假装睡觉——父亲留下项链——观察项链——父亲的爱
3.词汇激活
行为类
①走近我：come up to me/come close to me
②放下：lay/put/place
③握住：hold/catch hold of
情绪类
①令人惊讶的是：surprisingly/to one’s surprise
②深爱对方：love each other deeply/deeply in love with each other
【点睛】
【高分句型1】I opened my eyes just a sliver, from which I saw a tall, slender form.（由“介词+which”引导非限制性定语从句）
【高分句型2】My dad, who never gave hugs and never said, “I love…” had just said it all.（由关系代词who引导非限制性定语从句）
2．阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
An Adventure on the Beach
It’s a perfect family summer seaside holiday. Occasionally some white clouds floated across the blue sky. The sandy beach was soft and comfortable. The water was glistering in the morning sunlight and the surf was cool on their feet as Krin and Paula leisurely walked along the water edge. The brother and sister began to make some sandcastles. Not far away, mother sat under a big umbrella, reading a book with a bottle of lemonade in her hand. Father was busy exchanging a few words of greetings with the strangers he met on the beach.
Suddenly, Krin spotted some pieces of seashells lying scattered on the picturesque beach and small holes stretching along it where the crabs had hidden. He immediately invited Paula to collect shells and search the holes together with him. They were having a ball exploring what appeared to be a never-ending beach.
After a while, they stopped and looked back. Their parents and the umbrellas, beach chairs, and crowds were a long way off. But just ahead, hidden amongst sea grape trees st
ood a run-down house that seemed to be out of repair for years. It appeared to be unoccupied. Curious, they went to investigate.
The front steps to the doorway of the house creaked (嘎吱作响) as they carefully climbed up them, so did the porch when they stepped onto it. The dusty windows and porch railing (门廊栏杆) were badly weathered and broken. The front door was half open so they squeezed through and cautiously entered. The place was in a total mess, covered with dust, sand, dead leaves, and overturned furniture. They’d taken but a few steps when the door unexpectedly slammed shut behind them.
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