题型有：1. PART ONE 2. PART TWO
PART ONE
1． You have to change the date of a marketing meeting that was scheduled for next Friday.Write an email to all members of the marketing team: giving the new date of the meeting explaining why the date of the meeting has been changed providing details of an additional point for the agenda. Write 40-50 words.To…Marketing TeamCc…Subject: New date for Friday’s meeting
正确答案：The marketing meeting that was scheduled for next Friday will take place on Monday. We had to change the date due to technical problems, with the computer equipment.Please note that there will be an extra presentation at the end of the meeting concerning teamwork.
PART TWO
2． The international retail company you work for is concerned about the performance of its New York store. Your line manager has asked you to write a proposal making recommendations for the store’s future. Look at the information below, on which you have already made some handwritten notes. Then, using all your handwritten notes, write your proposal. Write 120-140 words.
正确答案：Proposal: “New York store”After reviewing the activities of our NY store, some measures seem to be necessary to improve the performance of the store and keep it open-.— First of all, we should cut the cost of running the store by optimising the logistics of the store.— Additionally, the store manager should be replaced and some team building activities should be conducted because the staff is very unhappy with the present management.— in order to rise sales again, we should invest on the one hand in some advertising and on the other hand in a new store design. This might also improve the poor store image.All measures should start as soon as possible because otherwise we may have to close this very good located store.
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