题型有：1. PART ONE 2. PART TWO
PART ONE
1． Your company has decided to make a change to its working hours. Write an email to staff in your department: describing the change to working hours explaining the reason for this change saying when the working hours will change. Write 30-40 words on your Answer Sheet.
正确答案：Sample ATo: All staffSubject: Working hoursIn the first week of September the working hours will change. All staff will work from 9:00AM to 16:00PM, and each employement is able to choose his free day. I decided to do this change because a lots Staff’s people complained about working hours.Band 4A good attempt at the task. All the content points have been covered, but a little effort is required by the reader.Sample BOur working time in the afternoon will change from 14:00-17:00 to 15:00-18:00. This is due to the
arrival of summer so we’d better leave more time for rest in the noon. The new timetable will take effect next week.Band 5This is a very good attempt at the task set. All points are fully covered.
PART TWO
2． Read part of a letter below from a company which runs training courses for staff.We are an established company providing a wide range of training services for all kinds of business. We have our own purpose-built centre where we hold courses, or training can be offered at the client’s own premises if preferred. We offer excellent value for money and a full 100% satisfaction guarantee.For further information, or to arrange an appointment to discuss your requirements, please contact Miss Jane Foster.Write an email to Miss Foster: expressing an interest in her company’s services describing your company’s training needs explaining why your company’商务英语写作s premises would be the most suitable place inviting her to a meeting next week. Write 60-80 words on your Answer Sheet. Do not include any postal addresses.Dear Miss Foster,
正确答案：Sample CDear Miss FosterI express an interest in your company’s services. I describe my company’s training needs, we are an established company providing a wide range of training services for all kinds of bussniss. we have our own purpose-built centre where we hold courses, or training can be offered at the client’s own premises if preferred, we offer excellent value for money and a full 100% satisfaction guarantee. So please inviting you to a meeting next week.Band 1The first and fourth points are addressed, but the candidate’s response is mostly lifted from the input and is largely irrelevant.Sample DDear Miss Foster,I write this letter for interesting in your company services, getting this informating from internet, we know you can offer venual for trainging.On 13 June we want to held a training new staff about our products, it will have 30 persons attend to the course.Due to your purpose-built centre is near to our company and have suitable place, we can work with together.I invite you come to my company next week.I look forward hearing from you.LindaBand 3The third point is not achieved. A number of errors are present, but overall this is a reasonable achievement of the task set.
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