【篇一：20122013高考英语作文范文汇编】
2012年上海高考英语作文
directions: write an english composition in 120 - 150 words according to the instructions given
below in chinese.
上周一，你在一所小学观摩了小女孩amy所在班级的两堂绘画课（如图所示），回家后你用英语写了一篇日记，内容包括：
● 对两堂绘画课的具体描述；
● 你从中获得的启发。
2012 shanghai english test writing sample1
( for reference only )
today i had an unusual experience , which refreshed my mind. with pupils i spent two periods of time in a primary school, watching them learn how to paint. a little girl named amy, one student of the class, left me a deep impression with her unique painting.
, in any way they could draw whatever they’d like to. amy was the first one to have a try. i saw her think for a little while, take off her shoes, then dip her feet slightly into the paint/ink. much to my surprise, in a flash she managed to make a nice design on a broad piece of white paper/blanket with both of her feet. what happened next, various of types of works painted by other children appearing before my eyes one by one ,kept me laughing with joy and amusement.
following a break, smiling ,the teacher made a brief comment, which was full of praise as well as appreciation. after that ,she gave the students some guidance about the traditional way of painting. with her teachers’ words in mind , amy practice
d again. painting-brush in hand ,she sat a desk properly/straight ,paying full attention to her work. this time，with ease and excitement she drew some birds flying high in the sky /sun.
well worth following in matters of cultivating “flowers” in the spirit of originality.
given that children are of great imagination and elasticity in their growth , they are
supposed to be given as many chances and opportunities as possible in the course of being educated so as to develop their potential to the full.
2012 shanghai english test writing sample 2
( for reference only )
two periods of time in a primary school, watching them learn how to paint. a little girl named amy, one student of the class, left me a deep impression with her unique painting.
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in any way they could draw whatever they’d like to. amy was the first one to have a try. i saw her think for a little while, take off her shoes, then dip her feet slightly into the paint/ink. much to my surprise, in a flash she managed to make a nice design on a broad piece of white paper/blanket with both of her feet. what happened next, various of types of works painted by other children appearing before my eyes one by one ,kept me laughing with joy and amusement.
comment, which was full of praise as well as appreciation. after that ,she gave the students some guidance about the traditional way of painting. with her teachers’ words in mind , amy practiced again. painting-brush in hand ,she sat a desk properly/straight ,paying full attention to her work. this time，with ease and excitement she drew some birds flying high in the sky /sun.
potential in their growth and development. as a matter of fact, whether their talents can be developed to the full, to a great degree, depends on how children are educated. while some valuable traditions are well worth cherishing, thinking in an ori
ginal way should be encouraged and emphasized among children when it comes to teaching or education, who are supposed to be characterized by “innovation and creation ”.
2013年上海高考英语作文
ii. guided writing
directions: write an english composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given in chinese.
1. 简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；
2. 说明你的理由(从便利性，专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比)。
sample i
to whom it may concern,
i’ve learned that an art exhibition is to be held and that you’re collecting suggestions on its location. than in community libraries. my reasons are as follows.
it is more convenient for people to get to shanghai museum, (which is) located in the center of the city. and the museum is much more spacious than community libraries, which provides visitors with a more comfortable environment for appreciating art.
as a well-known museum, shanghai museum is more professional and experienced in holding art exhibitions. its professional security guards and advanced facilities can better protect those famous paintings from being damaged or stolen. yours sincerely
wang min
sample ii
dear sir or madam,
i have heard from the newspaper that you, the shanghai museum, are planning to organize a famous painting exhibition. and you are now collecting suggestions about whether to hold it in your museum or in community libraries. i am now writing the museum has more advantages over community libraries. first, it is located in the people’s square, the center of the city. so people can enjoy convenient transportation such as the subway line 1, 2 and 8, which are available to people from nearly every district. it saves the visitors a lot of time and trouble of traffic jams. another advantage is that it is easy to be found by those from other provinces around the country. after all, the shanghai museum is a landmark of
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