高中英语作文专题训练20题(含范文)
一、读写任务
1.Sally walked onto the platform, picked up a piece of chalk and wrote on the blackboard: “Rule 1: We are family! “ All students stopped to look at her. And she continued with Rule 2, Rule 3… In the following weeks, Sally worked out 10 class rules and posted them on the walls of the classroom. She patiently explained all the rules to the students and require everyone to follow them.
Surprisingly, Sally was not driven out like the former teachers; instead, she won respect from the students. Over the year, she witnessed gradual change in the class. At the graduation ceremony, just as she expected, she was very proud to stand with a class of care, manners and confidence.
[写作内容]
1. 用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2. 用约120个词就班规谈谈你的想法,内容包括:
(1) 你们班最突出的问题是什么?
(2) 针对该问题你会设计一条什么班规?
(3)你认为班规会带来什么影响?
【写作要求】
1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文的句子。2. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。
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【答案】One possible version:
Sally was a teacher, who taught some students full of problems. The students didn’t follow the school rules. Therefore, she made the rules for them. Later they made great progress.
In our class, some students don’t work hard and often fight with each other. I will tell them some stories about hard-working people.I will make a study plan to encourage them to study work. I put up some sayings on the walls to remind them to do so.I will explain to them that studying hard is very important. They aren’t allowed to fight at school.In this way, students have a good habit. Most of the students follow the school rules and study work. They will respect teachers and other classmates. They will have good manners and confidence. Later they will get better grades.
【解析】
【导语】
本篇书面表达属于读写任务。要求考生用30词总结文章内容,并用120词就班规谈谈看法。
【详解】
1.词汇积累
充满:full of→be filled with
因此:therefore→hence
养成好习惯:have a good habit→form a good habit
获得:get→obtain英语作文范文
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In our class, some students don’t work hard and often fight with each other.
拓展句:In our class, some students who don’t work hard often fight with each other.
【点睛】
【高分句型1】Sally was a teacher, who taught some students full of problems.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】I will explain to them that studying hard is very important.(运用了that引导宾语从句,动名词作主语)
二、图画作文
2.假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者,以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻,请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。内容要求:
1.描述漫画内容;2.发表个人感想。
注意:
1.短文标题与开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯;
3.词数120左右;4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。
参考词汇:告示牌 sign
Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.
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【答案】One possible version:
Mind Your Behavior in Public Places
Last Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. What's worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring th
e noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby. What a shame!
Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.