--Miss.Q
英语作文例文点评88篇 （收集于网络）
【要求】
英语课上老师教给同学们一句英语格言“No Pains, No Gains” （不劳则不获），并让大家围绕如下三方面以这句格言为题写一篇短文。
人们在困难面前容易气馁，并产生不劳而获的想法。
“不劳则不获”这一格言能给予人鼓励。
学生要取得优异成绩离不开苦功夫，所谓成功的秘诀即是辛勤的劳动。
【范文】
No Pains, No Gains
People attempting a task may be discouraged in front of difficulties. They start with a great interest and passion. When they find that the task will take much more effort than they thought, their interest diminishes and their passion wanes. At that time, they are likely to have the idea of reaping a good harvest without much labor.
The old saying “No pains, no gains” comes as a word of cheer to these discouraged persons. No task that is really worth doing can be done either easily or quickly. No mastery of any knowledge or skill can be gained without painstaking efforts.
We students shoulder the task of learning knowledge that calls for exertion. To improve our grades is what every student wants. We may envy those who have achieved excellence, and wonder what makes them succeed. In fact, their secret of success is no secret. It depends largely on their efforts. Good grades only belong to hardworking students.
Many thanks for the favor you did for me!
【评语】
该文紧紧围绕题目给出的三方面加以论述，层次清楚，语言流畅易懂。“interest diminishes and their passion wanes” 中词语搭配讲究，“reaping a good harvest without much labor” 用另一个习惯表达法点出了“No Pains, No Gains”的含义，同时又避免了重复。文章句式灵活，长短搭配得当，使文章朗朗上口，虽然是议论文，但却没有枯燥之感。
【要求】
根据下面的提示写一篇短文，内容须包括下面几个要点。
没有坚强的意志就不可能取得成功。
事业成功须非凡的干劲。
有些人害怕困难，则一事无成。
【范文】
Where there is a Will, There is a Way
No man can win success without strong will. We hear some men have got good results, but hardly realize that the great men had been making more efforts before they achieved success.
Success requires an unusual amount of energy to overcome difficulties. So it is important for us to have great resolution.
Some men tend to be afraid of difficulties. If they meet with some difficulties, they will give in. So they get nothing eventually.
So let's make up our minds, stick to it and surely win success in our career.
Focus on the most important things to do to help your organization be successful. Don't focus on the easiest things.
【评语】
对这种提纲式作文，一定要囊括所给提纲中的全部内容，但又无须拘泥于提纲，更不能逐字逐句地“翻译”。对此应发挥自己的想像力和创造力，大胆地创作扩展。
【要求】
很多人都希望能在事业上有所成就，但不是所有人都能取得胜利。成功需要顽强的意志，锲而不舍的努力，勤奋学习的精神。请你以此为主要内容，准备一篇百字左右的简短发言。
【范文】
The way to success
Everyone tries to achieve success in his/her career. But some finally attain their aims while others fail. Why? Some continue their cause to the end through long period of hard
struggles, but others are easily disappointed and stop halfway.
Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Life is short and we have too much to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything.
I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can make constant efforts.
Don't be afraid of life. Believe that life is worth living, and your belief will help create the fact.
【评语】
这是一篇议论文，作者首先提出问题，再提出自己观点：意志坚强、锲而不舍、勤奋，是成功的三大要素。作者在结尾，巧妙地运用了谚语“where there is a will there is a way”，使文章增不少。
【要求】
坚强的意志(Man's Strong Will)请以下面三句分别作为三段段首的主题句，写一篇以坚强的意志为题的文章。
Strong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality.
There have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will.
It is not easy to cultivate a strong will.
【范文】
Man's Strong Will
Strong will is universally regarded as a very praisable quality. It is neither genius nor extraordinary ability that gives us power to deal with and overcome whatever hardship tha
t befalls. It is strong will that enables us to endure the trying situation and to attain our goals. Strong will gives us light when we are in the dark, and encouragement when we are frustrated. With this meritorious quality, no enemy can overwhelm us, and no obstacles can stand in our way. As the saying goes, where there is a will, there is a way.
All pain helps to make us rise, how-ever much we may hate it at the time.
There have been many examples that success can be achieved by strong will. During the Long March, the Red Army soldiers met with the greatest hardship men have ever experienced. They had nothing to eat but grass roots and barks of trees. It was their strong will that made them defeat the hardship. Helen Keller, a strong willed American blind woman, mastered the English language and became a well-known educator. Such instances abound, and suffice it just to enumerate the two.
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